No one can deny the effectiveness of punishment asa means of correcting juvenile issues.
The act of depriving of or revoking something precious to your child will make him think twice on being mischief again
.... I prefer if you simplified this sentence a bit more.
In worst cases it develops hatred in a child to his family.
In the worst case, it may develop hatred in a child towards his family.For example,back when I was young, I havehad this uncle who used to punish me for not doing the chores.
Instead of teaching melearning a lesson for my life , I ended up disliking him until now.to date .
Overall, this is a very impressive essay. You can surely write very well.