E-Books vs. Paper Books
Because of the new invention of this modern era, most people are considerably interested to download an e-book on their smart technologies such as phones and laptops since this kind of books is weigh less and much easier for people to hold by their hands. Due to the trend of people reading an e-books, There will be fewer people who buy a paper-book. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Tis essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of e-book trends.
The first advantage of e-book trends is that people can easily handle several books on their phones. To clarify, people do not have to hold several paper-books which are heavier than holding just e-books on their phones. Moreover, publications do not have to cut a tree and make a thousand book to sell. All they needs is just to write a book on the computer and release it on the internet. As a result, this will help them save their times and money by selling an e-book.
There are also several disadvantages of reading an e-book. Some group of people like the poor may not have a chance to receive this type of books due to the fact that they do not have sufficient money to buy the smart technologies, which use to download the books. Furthermore, reading e-books too much might have an effect on your eyes. Because of the light on the smart technologies, people may feel slightly dizzy or have the problem of their eye vision. Cleary, this type of books will have the effects for some groups of people.
In conclusion, this trends will provide the conveniences for people and environmental friendly to the earth. Also, this trend will effect people's health and the poor who cannot afford for the books. after considering both sides of this question, I believe that the disadvantages of the rise of e-books outweigh the disadvantages. The compelling reasons why I feel there are more drawbacks on this is because reading an e-book will affect people's eyes vision and it is not unequal for the poor people. Additionally, I mostly feel that using two hands holding the books and opening each paper to continually read provide the real feeling of reading more than sliding to change pages on the screens.Hi, I think you did a pretty good job of addressing the prompt until your final paragraph. The prompt did not ask for your personal opinion, so unless it does, do not give your opinion. Your writing was fairly clear, but you had a lot of small grammar errors that overall make your essay sound unnatural. You especially should work on singular/plural, since you have a lot of mistakes in that area. Here are some specific suggestions:
Because of the new invention {what new invention? You have to tell the reader specifically} of this modern era,
... considerably interested in downloading an e-book
on their smart technology devices such as phones
this kind of books is weighs less and (...) to hold in their hands. {this is a reason - don't introduce your reasons in the introduction, wait until the body paragraphs}
people reading an e-books, there will be fewer people
The first advantage of the e-book trend {this sounds repetitive, as you used the exact same phrase in the sentence before}
easily handle {"store" seems better here} several books ...
people do not have to carry several paper-books
Moreover, publishers do not have ... make a thousand books to sell. All they need is just to write a book
save their [time] and money ...
Some groups of people
receive this type of book due to the fact
technologies, which are used to download the books.
Because of the light from the smart technologies,
Also, this trend will affect people's health
books will have detrimental effects for ...
In conclusion, this trend will provide convenience for people and it is environmentally friendly to the earth.
... cannot afford for the books. {well, the trend won't really effect those who can't afford it, the trend will just bypass them}
it is not equal for the poor people.
using two hands to hold the books and opening each page to continually read
