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The role of parents is significant. They teach their children how to live and face problems.


abedkh 8 / 6 1  
Nov 10, 2011   #1
Many people such as teachers, friends and parents in life of any person have an important influence. They play an important role in everybody's life, but among them parents have the most important effect on their future.

parents show their children how to live. In childhood, children can not face troubles and parents show them how to conquer problems. Parents keep away them from danger and warn them. Beside of these they support their children with no expectation. I can't imagine my life without support of my parents. I just remember when I was kid, I had a fight with my friend and my father forced me to apologize to him. Such behavior has showed itself today in my life. I've taught how to forgive and apologize easily. They show me that nothing is important than love.

Parents should know how to communicate with their children. Their children must trust on them and this is not possible without a friendly relationship. parents should share their thought with their children and allow them to decide in troubles. I share my problems with my parents and their experience help me to solve my problems in the best.

furthermore, One of the most important ages of any person is adolescence. In this period of life they need more support than other periods. parents should know their friends and be aware about their relationship and control their behavior as much as possible.

In conclusion, in everybody's life a lot of people are influenced but among them the role of parents is significant than others. They teach their children how to live and face problems. They support them and keep away from danger and they do all of this with no expectation.
OP abedkh 8 / 6 1  
Nov 11, 2011   #2
Parents are the best teachers.

Teachers, friends, and parents are important influences in any life. Each play major roles, but among them parents have the most strongest impact on their future.

While still maturing, a child can not face troubles independently without parents showing them how to conquer everyday problems. They support their children expecting nothing in return and that's makes them a special teachers.

I have learned how to forgive easily. I have learned there is nothing important than love. They have taught me all of these. I remember years back, I had a fight with my friend, and under duress from my father, I apologized. Such behaviours have influenced me today.

Parental communication is essential with growing children. Their children must be able to trust them , and this is not possible without a amicable relationship. Parents should be able to share their thoughts with their children and allow them to take part in family troubles. I share my problems with my parents and their experience and good judgement helps me resolve them in the best way.

Furthermore, one of the most significant phases is during adolescence. In this period of life the most support is needed.

Ultimately, in life people influence change in lifestyle, but among them parents play the imperative role. Through motivation and advice, parents shape their children to become model adults; therefore, parents are the best teachers.
noal 2 / 3  
Nov 11, 2011   #3
I think you should inform what kind of essay this is. Common app essay, or supplement essay, or anything.
About the essay, the first thing I notice is that the topic is typical, as well as the way you operate your essay. The reader may find it pretty boring. If you can not change the topic, let try to change the sentence and the voice.

Also, I think your essay lacks in evidences/examples/actions/reality etc. Try to provide things to prove your idea-not just say it.
fabaca 2 / 4  
Nov 13, 2011   #4
Each (plays) major (role), but among them parents have the most strongest(or profound ,or noticeable) impact on their future.

While still maturing, a child can not face(expose to) troubles independently

that's(that) makes them a special teachers.

I have learned there is nothing(more) important than love.

Parental communication (or guidance)is essential with(for) growing children.

Furthermore, one of the most significant phases is adolescence.

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