The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The three pie charts provide information about how money was spent in a UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
First of all, the amount of money spent on insurance increased throughout the three years, from 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001. In contrast, spending on workers' salaries excluding teachers fell by 13% after a 20-year period.
However, there was a different in the category of resources and teachers' salaries. Annual spending on the former accounted for 15% in 198, rose by 5% ten years later, followed by a drop of 11% in 2001. Similarly, with respect to the latter, 40% of the total school spending went to teachers' salaries in the first recorded year; then in 1991, the percentage reached 50% before decreasing slightly by 5% in 2001. Meanwhile, an opposite trend was witnessed regarding furniture and equipment. The proportion of money spent on this category constituted 15% in 1981 and soared by 18% in 2001 after falling dramatically ten years before.
Overall, it is clear from the charts that most of the total annual school spending was for the staff salaries.
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The three pie charts provide information about how money was spent in a UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The same comment: "Write a general trend at the end of introduction"
the three studied years
before
a slight reduction ofdecreasing slightly by 5% in 2001
Meanwhile, an opposite trend was witnessed(I prefer the word "observed") regarding furniture and equipment. The proportion of money(u can use the word "budget" instead of "money") spent on this category constituted 15% in 1981 and soared by 18% in 2001 after falling dramatically ten years before.
Write this part as a new paragraph.
