Listening Summary : Artificial Gills - enabling human to breathe in the water
We all know that all living creature needs oxygen. When it comes to human, they could not breathe under the water, and sometimes drown in the water. For that reason, several scientists is in an effort to invent a device which enable human to breathe under the water for a long time. The former breathing apparatus, called scuba, is painful and heavy. So that, they need a device that can extract oxygen directly from water while swimming, and comfortable to use. The artificial gills, is the solution for this problem. To create an artificial gill, we need to find fragile material with big surface area, and we also need tiny tubes and valves to enabling divers to breathe. The imperative step is that we should keep the water move. The speaker, had created her own artificial gills and tried it in the swimming pool, and she can breathe for 45 minutes. In the future, the speaker believe that the device has a great potential in marine area.
source : Cambridge
... all living creatureS need
1. CREATURES ---> it must be plural because you said "all living creatures" which means it is more than one type of crature
2. Creatures===> need (without S)
Overall you just make a tiny mistakes, keep hard work and break a leg !
Allow me to give you some suggestions.
- We all know that all living creatures need
- ..., several scientists
isare in an effort to ...
- ..., is painful and heavy
.So that, so they need a device...
- The artificial gills,
is are the solution ...
- and she
can could breathe for 45 minutes....
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Hope it helps you.
Hello, I give my correction for you
creature creatures needs need oxygen ("all" indicate the plural noun, so you must write "creatures" and use singular verb "need")
isare in an effort (the subject is plural, so you must use plural verb too)
believebelieves(remember the subject "the speaker" is singular)
Hello here my advice for you.
is in an >> PLURAL NOT SINGULAR (using are not is)
creature needs >> your word not appropriate for that sentence, (creatures need)
The artificial gills,
is the solution for this problem > are not is
your writing is quite good, but many wrong grammatical, particularly using plural and singular.
Here, my corrections toward your writing
For that reason, several scientists is in an effort to invent ...
>>> several scientists carried out the ambitious project to invent a technology device which enables a human to air in and out of lungs although in the sea.
note: you wrote every single sentence perfectly, you used word connector properly while you used varied vocabulary. Furthermore, although you provide the brief explanation, it provide us with an array of information. However, you have to notice to your writing whether your sentence already provided and showed enough information before you are going to explain other topic