Music is an inevitable part of our life
Watch the little things ... this should be "lives" instead of "life." Life is singular ... one life to live. Lives is plural.
to listen for music
We'd say, "to music" instead of "for music."
We were listening to the different sounds and
of rhythms even when we are not brought out to this world of noise and rhythms and music.
I am not sure what you are trying to say in the second part of this: when we are not brought out to this world of noise and rhythms and music.
Even those who think they are not musical person
Watch your numbers agreement again. "Those" and "they" are plural, but "person" is singular.