How to see the thoughts you don't know you are having - Caroline Williams
Every second, large of quantities idea emerge on our mind. Those are in unconscious area in which almost all people are not aware of what their thinking. In actual fact, a few experimental have been developing to touch our hidden area. Harvard University's Scholars carried out the research by using quick response test to exposing unconscious behaviour regarding origion, sexuality and gender. Unfortunately, it is strenuous to catch. While, another researcher, Russell Hurlburt from University of Nevada Las Vegas, provides different approach. He commanded volunteers to wear an earpiece which will randomly beep for six times a day, then ask them to note their mind. After a half of decade, he has concluded that minority of people have an idea what they are thinking.
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