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Seek the Truth; do not believe in something simply because an authority says so


ishigaki 1 / -  
Feb 17, 2011   #1
Is it a mistake to believe something simply because an authority says so? Yes, I believe it is. To ascertain the truth, one must thoroughly research and investigate, not just believe in it because an authoritative figure says so. Lying is easy when a person has some outsize power. Hitler believed his people were the superior race, that the Aryans were the best and told his countrymen that and they believed. He did not have any evidence and of course it certainly wasn't true. Ignorance is bliss, so they say, but living in a lie is a mistake. But this can be solved though. When an authority claims something take it with a grain of salt, there could be some truth to it or find out for yourself. Seeking out the truth might not be easy but at least you found it and chose not to live with a claim that may or may not be true. As people we have the right to know. And since we have that right, why not make use of it? Seek the truth out and do so gladly knowing that you fand after yourself and don't just believe in someone who is an authority. In the end you will be glad you did.
paprickorn - / 4  
Feb 18, 2011   #2
Very good abstract! "Ignorance is bliss, so they say, but living in a lie is a mistake" - I like this sentence the most. It reminds me some quotes: The authority of those who teach is very often a hindrance to those who wish to learn. (Marcus Tullius Cicero). In questions of science, the authority of a thousand is not worth the humble reasoning of a single individual. (Galileo Galilei)
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Feb 26, 2011   #3
Comma:
Hitler believed his people were the superior race, that the Aryans were the best, and told his countrymen that, so they believed him.--I added a few words for clarity.

You did a great job!

So, in classical rhetoric, there are three elements: ethos, logos, and pathos. Logos is logic, and pathos is emotional appeal, but ethos is credibility from someone's position. If someone is in a position of authority, it does not necessarily mean they have credibility with regard to the subject at hand.

You should check out Thoreau's Civil Disobedience for ideas.
This is a good, solid paragraph with excellent examples.


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