It seems that people are very thrifty in regard to expenditures on leisure and education

The table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. Overall, it is evident that all five countries spend the majority of their consumer expenditure country on food/drink/tobacco and clothing/footwear. On the other hand, the percentages of consumer expenditure on leisure/education have the lowest percentages.

According to the table, out of the five countries, Turkey and Ireland had the highest percentage of consumer spending on food/drinks/tobacco respectively at 32.14% and 28.91%. Turkey also had much higher percentage of leisure/education at 4.35%, while consumer expenditure on clothing/footwear was significantly higher in Italy at 9% than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentage of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, respectively 16.36% and 5.40%. Spain had slightly higher figure for this category but had the lowest figure for leisure/education at 1,98%.

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That is not an overview because you only describe information about notice of the table. The overview is a summary of general trends in the table. Besides that, you have to display comparisons amongst the figures. Well, I will offer the example of overview.

OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT COSTUMERS OF ALL COUNTRIES ARE MORE LIKELY TO LOCATE THEIR BUDGET TO PURCHASE OF FOOD/DRINK/TOBACCO THAN OTHER CATEGORIES. FURTHERMORE, TURNING TO EACH CATEGORY, CITIZENS OF ITALY SPENT THEIR INCOME MORE THAN THE OTHERS FOR CLOTHING/FOOTWEAR, WHILE OTHER GROUPS OF EXPENDITURE ARE DOMINATED BY COSTUMERS' TURKEY.

.., Turkey and Ireland had HAVE (Owing to not the information about the year, it should be categorised as the fact data so that you are supposed to use simple present) the highest percentage of ...

Turkey also had HAS much higher percentage of (...), while THE consumer'S expenditure on clothing/footwear was IS significantly higher ...

It can be seen that Sweden had HAS the lowest percentage of ...
Spain had HAS slightly THE higher figure for this ...

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... items in five different countries consists of Ireland, Italy, Spain,..

... consumer expenditure country on food/drink/tobacco and clothing/footwear .

On the other hand, the percentages of consumer expenditure on leisure/education have the lowest percentages.

... respectively at 32.14% andto 28.91%.

Turkey also had much higher percentage of (...) significantly higherincrease in Italy atto 9% than in any of the other countries.

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