Career has a great role in our life , can impacts on life of any one of us , it has negative and postive effects,So, selecting our career is a very difficult decision that we will do,every person should think carefully from indicating their career,This decision is different from one person to another one.
Hi Rozha!you are using a lot of commas even at places where you need to put period. It is making me, as a reader, difficult to understand what you want to describe.
every person should think carefully from indicating their career,
indicating or choosing???
from one person to another one
from person to person.
and take some great responsibilies, and some of them came from poor background they like to have a good income
take some great responsibilities
while others
come from poor background
, but they like to have a good income.
r background they like
background.
Since they like
,they dont
they do not OR don't
society , government
society
; therefore, government
person that want
person who/that
wantsPlease go through the use of Capitalization, Periods, Comma and Verbs.
Good Luck