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Exploration space EXPLORATION OF SPACE has a considerable value for everyone. The expanding of technology brings the huge impactSthroughout TO the world, particularly space technology that makes possible society explore other planets SOCIETY ABLE TO EXPLORE OTHER PLANETS. In the modern era, it is argued that people going outer space have had more to do with national pride than international effort. I firmly believe that people who explore the space have been made their nationality proud of them (NEED A COMMA) because they brought their country identity when they explored the space, like a flag. However, others believe that space exploration implied in global effort due to the fact that it occurs because collaboration and supporting from other countries.
To sum up, Astronautan astronaut who succeeded to travel outer space will bring the prestigious achievement about their country. However, the uniqueness of this exploration create a global proud what they do and collaboration with other countries in many parts of the world. I firmly believe that free-space settlements could be wonderful places to live.