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UK: significant increase in the using of debit cards and a steady rise in the using of credit cards


Naiman 1 / 1  
Aug 17, 2014   #1
The graph shows non-cash transactions by method of payment such as debit cards, cheques credit and charge cards in the United Kingdom between from 1991 to 2007.

There were a significant increase in the using of debit cards and a steady rise in the using of credit and charge cards. Debit cards were the most popular method of payment at the middle of the period, and using reached a peak of about five billions in about 2007. In 1993, the using of credit and charge cards exceeded that of debit cards for the first time, but during the period of 2004 and 2005 there were a slight decline in the using of credit and charge cards, which seems set to continue a stable increase. There has been a marked decline of using cheques untill 2007 then, so that by about 2002 they were less popular than either debit cards or charge cards.




sssenyoritaa 2 / 4  
Aug 19, 2014   #2
methods of payment - between or from , you can't use both of it - and using [what ?? u should at least say <it>]reached a peak of about five billions
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Aug 20, 2014   #3
The graph shows non-cash transactions by method of payment such as debit cards, cheques credit and charge cards in the United Kingdom between from 1991 to 2007.

Ok, this is your introduction. Then how about your Overview? Write an overview which describes the main trends of the graph to give the reader an overall picture about what the graph presents. Do not include any detailed figures or statistics in the overview and limit it to explain the main trends very briefly.

Are you within the required word count for this task? It looks too short for me :(
OP Naiman 1 / 1  
Aug 20, 2014   #4
Thanks a lot. There are 153 words


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