... I would tend to claim
suchthat overusing the internet can change
There is no doubt that emergence of
state-of-the-art gadgets lead individuals to have ...
The internet which is connected through smartphone which can completing most of human's necessities.As a result, people who in a hurry which
do not have to queue a long time when they must suddenly
meeting or an emergency accident
All in all, although the internet has gone beyond expectation in our daily life, there is ...conclusion is paraphrasing from introduction. So, don't add new idea in your conclusion.