A small country with big ideas - Costarica

Costarica is one developing country which located at right in the middle of Americas. It country have nearly five million people. Actually they had fossil fuel, but this resource not generated for their electrity because it focusly to supply their electricity transportation system for next period. So that their can power their cars, buses, and trains. In the future, in 2022, this country are already trying electric buses and cars that can save money and reduce pollution. On the other hand, surprisingly this country had other alternative energy resources that fulled by 70 per cent of electricity. It found from five renewable resources: hydropower, geothermal, wind, solar, and biomass. This energy comes from water in their rivers, heat from volcanoes, wind turbines, solar panels, and biowaste. There are 3 reasons why Costarica make and choose this plan, but the major reason is "the world is hungry of new inspiration".

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hai andika
I have several suggestions for you

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Actually, they had fossil fuel, (...) generated for their electrityelectricity because it focusly to ...

So that their can power for their cars, buses, and trains.

It found from five renewable resources consist o f hydropower, geothermal, ...

This energy comes from water in their rivers, heat from volcanoes, wind ...

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Hallo bro,

There are several correction for you,

Costarica is one of developing country which ...
..It country have nearly five million people.
... but this resource did not generatedelectrical power for themfor their electrity because they focusit focusly to supply thetheir electricity transportation ...
..So that their they can produce power to their cars, ...

Hi Alam,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you.
1. Costarica is one of the developing countries which located at right side in the middle of Americas.
2. wrong spelling word
electrity ----> electricity
3. It country have nearly five million people. ----> This country have nearly five million citizens
4.So that their can power their cars, buses, and trains. ------> So they can produce power for their cars, buses, and trains.

hi..
I have some points in your essay..

It[this] country have[has] nearly five million people. Actually they[it]had[has] fossil fuel, but this resource [is] not generated fo

I hope it helps..