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Smoking ban - essay argumentative


Abutaleb2009 1 / 2  
Nov 14, 2009   #1
Smoking should be banned everywhere:
The harms of smoking have become more popular around the world . Global health organization has discussed many of topics about the effects of smoking which include lung cancer, heart diseases , mouth cancer and many other associated health problems . In my country many people die every year .You could also find more information about these problem in the many websites on the internet which discuss this problem also when you go to any hospital you will see many photos on the walls that considers about effects problem smoking .This essay will look at the most important reasons why smoking should be banned everywhere .

The first reason to make smoking banned is to minimise diseases that affect human such as lung cancer , diseases heart and cancer mouth that afflict smoker during smoking and make his health very bad and he may not do any thing well because the smoker needs much breathing

The second reason is to save money that are paid to smoke because the packet of smoking cost much money so when the smoker buys every day packet how much money will be in the month and in the year too? . also the smoker won't has money to live happy life with his family and all time will be angry and thinks how he can get money to get cigarettes.

In summary , there is a need for smokers to be controlled and there is a need to ban smoking in everywhere to save human's money and his health also to save environment from pollution which causes it smoking

thinhtvdhtm 41 / 97  
Nov 14, 2009   #2
hello, i think that it is the first time u write essay, the ideas are quite good
there is no equality between the introduction and the body.
let try again
oh, i have never heard that smoking should be banned every where, it should be banned in public places only, i think so
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Nov 16, 2009   #4
The harms of smoking have become well-known around the world. The Global health organization has discussed many

You could also find more information about these problem in the many websites on the Internet which discuss this problem. Also, when you go to any hospital you will see many photos on the walls that considers about effects problem smoking .This essay will look at the most important reasons why smoking should be banned everywhere .

The first reason to make smoking banned is to minimize diseases that affect humans, such as ...

The second reason is to save money that people pay to smoke, because the pack of smoking cost much money so when the smoker buys a pack every day. How much money will be spent in the month and in the year too ?


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