Please, correct my writing IELTS Task 1 Practice
Before correcting, I would like to welcome you in this forum then some of these should be highly pondered further.
1. I suggest you to write in appropriate form. Commonly in Task 1 there are intro, overview and bodies.
These contrast markedly
However Veterinary,Agriculture is the lowest
How can I see those point ?Another side of levelable Australian's degree addressed
You cannot use past form as the reported years are not clearly written.Clearly result of two pie charts of the seven main fields of study social Sciences
Check your subject verb agreement.2. Remember to attach your reference picture,diagram or graph so we can examine whether or not your work is quite in line with the task.Even though grammar accuracy, lexical resource, coherence-and-cohesion are important, task responses is a must.