Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clother they wear. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the way people dress is able to reflect their job in this modern era. However, some people argue that the clothes cannot be used to indicate their background. I strongly believe that society's status is not able to be assessed just based on their dress.
These days, clothes which are worn by society can reflect their occupation and personalities. The physical appearance is able to make several perceptions regarding to character of people's proficiency. For instance, the women who work at night club tend to wear sexy dresses. They obligated to wear several clothes which can attract the visitors' attention, particularly the men. In the fact that they are supposed to show the best appearance every night to their client thought they are forced or not. Nevertheless, I would argue that the fashion which people choose cannot be used to decide who they are like.
Appearance is not lead role to show people's fashion style. Sometimes, several people likely convenient to wear clothes which make them comfortable or they love, whether they wear it in the right place and the right time or not. For example, the inhabitants tend to use T-shirt everyday even though they are wealthy people. Other societies who do not recognize them will judge that they do not have much money to purchase several good clothes which can enhance their appearance. Thus, those societies have the wrong perception in judging a person. It is evident that dresses are not able to determine people's status.
To sum up, clothes can show lots of people's jobs. Yet, I personally believe that people cannot asses other humans just based on what they see. Truthfully, the society must know other people first, before they judge other inhabitants' behaviour and background,
Hi Nida, I'll be straight forward with your essay.
First stop: The title
- The society's status is not able to be assessed just based on theirnot measured in the way they dress
I will take on the 2nd and the 3rd essay;
- can reflectis a reflection of their occupation
- tothe character of
- They're obligated
- In the fact,that they
- the fashion which people
- Appearance is not leada leading role to
- show people's fashion stylesense .
- people are likely to wear convenient - to wear clothes which make
Nida, I hope this corrections are helpful and I hope you follow through and correct the remaining paragraph yourself base on the actions done above.
Hi Nida. here is my comment. keep writing
It is true that the way people dress is able toreflect their job in this modern era.
These days, clothes which are worn by society can reflect their occupationS and personalities.
For instance, the women who work at night club tend to wear sexy dresses.
They felt obligated to wear several kind of clothes which can attract the visitors' attention, particularly the men.
In the fact [comma] that they are supposed supposed to show
Nevertheless, I would argue that the fashion which people choose chosed cannot be used to decide who they are like. what they like.
Sometimes, several people likely are convenient to wear clothes which make them comfortable or they love,clothes they love or what make them comfortable
. For example, the inhabitants tend to use T-shirt everyday even though they are wealthy people.
To sum up, clothes can show lots of people's jobsyou mean a person have more than one job in this sentence/. bias sentence.
Hello Nida, I try to give you another introduction part option
It is true that(There is no doubt that)the way people dress (The fashion style of the people ) is able to reflect their job in this modern era (can reflect their personality ). However, some people argue that the clothes cannot be used to indicate their background. I strongly believe that society's status is not able to be assessed just based on their dress.(cannot be known based on the fashion style of the people)
