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South Sudan Works to Rebuild Higher Education


amm_16 2 / 4  
Aug 12, 2016   #1
South Sudan is the latest country in the world after the referendum which the majority of southern Sudanese voted for independence from the government of Sudan. South Sudan very poor from the area of half a million square meters only fifty kilometers good road, almost no public electrical power or other basic systems. The majority of population cannot read or write (more than 80%). There are only two universities which the seventy-five percent of the lecturers come from Sudan and they could not teach in Southern Sudan. The solution for this condition, the government of South Sudan asked for their lecturer were abroad to return. They request to teach a wide range of knowledge and skills practice like carpentry, making bricks, micro-financing, and also small agriculture. Only four percent of good land in South Sudan is being farmed. While more one millions of people need food aid to survive. One of higher education which is ready to develop the knowledge and skills farming is University of Juba.
Rinnegan45 - / 39 5  
Aug 12, 2016   #2
Hi there!

I want to give some comments on your essays related to Grammar and Spelling errors.

"South Sudan IS very poor. from the area of half a million square meters only fifty kilometers covered with asphaltgood road , and almost no public electrical ..."

"There are only two universities around which the seventy-five percent of the lecturers ..."

"The solution for this condition is , the government of South Sudan asked ..."

"They "WERE" requestED to teach a wide range of knowledge ..."

"... good land in South Sudan isare being farmed"

"While more one "THAN" millions of people need food aid to survive. One of THE higher education which is ..."

thanks
OP amm_16 2 / 4  
Aug 12, 2016   #3
Thank you sir !
dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Aug 12, 2016   #4
Hi Amm!

South Sudan is very poor from the area of half a million square meters it only has fifty kilometers good road,

There are only two universities which (...) and they could notcan't teach in Southern Sudan.

... in South Sudan is being farmed,while morethan one millions of people need food aid to survive.


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