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TOEFL SPEAKING-The most embarrassing moment for me


whitney 21 / 38  
Jan 15, 2011   #1
The most embarrassing moment that ever happened to me is that I ever got into a male restroom by accident. Because it was an exclusive restroom in a corporation, there were no signals. Facing the two restrooms, I did not know how to choose. Finally, I just got into the nearer one, and, you know, it was the wrong one. Yes, I used it. Because it had no difference with female room, I did not know I was wrong until I saw two women got into the next room when I got out of the room. When I saw them I felt extremely embarrassed. I knew they must have thought that there was something wrong with me. After all, it happened three years ago, and they did not know me, so letting it go is ok.
linying 5 / 14  
Jan 15, 2011   #2
Hi, Yang. The most important about a toefl speaking section is to speak fluently and confidently. It is good to write your anwer down to check grammar error, but it is more important to practice speaking. what's more,I think the words of the answer is a little bit too much to finish in 45 seconds.maybe you can curtail your answer.
martesha 1 / 2  
Jan 15, 2011   #3
I think you should start off with accident and what was going on at that moment then as your conclusion say this the most embarssing moment for you. I hope this helps I am about to put my final draft up for my admission essay i would appreciate if you would look over it again. thanks for all your help
pashnetala 1 / 6  
Jan 15, 2011   #4
First sorry if my english is weak

overall in my opinion it's better to answer the 2 free choices questions with two causes and develop them.

I mean use these key words:

The most embarrassing moment that ever happened to me is ... (then develop it like you know its terrible... you know i got... you know ...) For one thing because... you know ... For another because...

at last say: these are the reasons why .... is ... . or "thats it" .

and do record your voice at least 3 or 4 times in 45 seconds for each Q.

do not stop saying your words by sounds like eeeeeee... hmmmmm...

in that case stop making sounds,think, then continue speaking

say several times "you know" to get time for thinking and continue speaking

again sorry if my english is weak.
I just prepared for toefl in 2weeks and got 90 (toefl ibt) speaking25
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Jan 20, 2011   #5
The most embarrassing moment that ever happened to me is that I ever got walked into a male restroom by accident.----ha haha ! That happens to everyone sometimes...

Google this: action verb
Look above, and see how I added an action verb. Action verbs improve the quality of writing.

Because it was an exclusive restroom in a corporation, ----hahahhaha! Excellent...

and there were no signals to indicate that it was the men's room.

Because it had no difference with to distinguish it from the female roo m, I did not know I was wrong until I saw two women got walk into the next room when I got out of the room.

I knew they must have thought that there was something wrong with me. --ha haha, so many of your sentences made me laugh. You are great.


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