there are several types of communication media for people, for instance phone
using some new methods of communication like email and phone is not only harmful
forto human's relationship but also is very vital, because of two important reasons .
I suppose you have misused the structure 'not only... but also...'. According to the OALD, 'not only...but also...' is 'used to emphasize that something else is also true'. So if you use this structure in your sentence, people will infer that you mean 'using new methods... is both harmful and vital'. That sounds quite contradictory, doesn't it? Here is my suggestion:My view is that far from doing harm to people's relationships, new methods of communication like email and phone play a vital role in human's everyday life because of two major reasons.
Today people because of working in their work place or study in university ,are distributed alongBecause their workplace and university locations are scattered along the city or even country, today people seem to have less...
,so phone and email solved this problemThis problem can easily be surmounted with the help of phones and email.
For instance, two years ago I studied in Berlin in Germany,
wherewhich was not my mother country, so I just could call or send email to my family and friends because I did not have any other communication wayways of communicaiton . Therefore , I believe email and phones are very useful media in human life.
doesdo not have enough time for visitingto visit
I could not
my friends' houses
with the help of phone I called all of them in an hour and greeted all of them without wasting any time or money
for goingneeded to go from one place to another
So I found
it email and phone are very useful in today's complex life.
In my opinion email and phone not only persisted against reducing personal relations but also increased it .How I mentioned staying in touch and communicating with a very little expense are the gift of email and telephone. Everyone for having constant interaction with family or friends have to use email and phone.To sum up, it is my belief that email and phones do not reduce ... but actually increase them. As mentioned above, staying in touch and... the gift of email and telephones. Everyone, in order to have constant ..., has to use email and phones.