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I stole my friend's money; learn from my makes mistakes!!


thjchlachjeu 1 / 1  
Mar 19, 2014   #1
Everyone have makes mistakes in our life.Some are big mistakes,and some are simple mistakes and eventually we'll learn from it's. For example, when you not try to do your homework.Also the simple mistakes we'll makes is to lying to our friend.My mistake is stolen money from my friend,i has learn from my mistake and i try to fixing my mistake to be success person.

First of all,my mistake is stolen money from my friend.When i was in 3 grade,i stolen money from my friend backpack since he not in the class.His name is Hiu.After ,Hiu coming into the class ,he realized that his money was losing.although,he asking me if i see where he money is,but i lied to him by saying 'i don't know,sorry''.In addition,he stair to cried,and i having a bad feelings come from my heart.

Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
Mar 19, 2014   #2
.Some are big mistakes,and some are simple mistakes and eventually we'll learn from it's.

Some are big mistakes while some are simple. Whatever the level of impact, we eventually learn lessons from every mistake.

For example, when you not try to do your homework.

This sentence is incomplete :(
For example, when you do not do your homework, you will find it is very hard to remember what is being taught.

First of all,my mistake is stolen money from my friend.

... wrong grammar :(
First, I did a big mistake when I was a kid by stealing money from a friend of mine.
dumi 1 / 6,929 1592  
Mar 20, 2014   #4
My mistake ishad been that I stolestolen money from my friend,i hasI learnedlearn from my mistake and i try to fixing my mistake to be success person.I tried to fix it and be a successful person in life.

When iI was in 3 gradegrade three, I,istolenstole money from my friend, Hiu's backpack sincewhen he was not in the class. After ,When Hiu coming intoreturned to the class ,he realized that his money was losingstolen . although,Although he askingasked me if i seewhether I saw the culpritwhere he money is,but i, I lied to him by saying 'iI don't know,sorry''.In addition,he stair to cried,and i having a bad feelings come from my heart . Then he broke down and started crying and I felt very bad about what I did and couldn't forgive myself for hurting my friend.


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