story: rope

My friends please check my story and tell me how can I make it more beautiful(tell me more and better vocabularies)? and are the tens of verbs correct?

" The Rope"

The story tells about a mountain climber,who wanted to climb the highest mountain.
He began his adventure after many years of experience ,but since he wanted the success just for himself,he decided to climb the mountain alone.

His climbing was going well and everything was ok till the very night that the mishap took place.
That night the moon and the stars were covered by the clouds and the man could not see anything .
As he was climbing only a few feet away from the top of the mountain ,he slipped and fell.
When he was falling with swift speed,the climber could not see anything but black spots, and he went down.
During the falling all of the good and bad scenes of his life came to his mind.He was thinking about how death was getting close.

All of a sudden he felt the rope tied to his waist and pulled him tightly.His body was hanging in the air and only the rope was holding him.

In that moment of stillness he had no other choice but to scream"Help me God"
Suddenly a deep voice came from the sky and said "What do you want me to do?"
"Save me God"
"Do you really think I can help u?"
"Of course I believe you can"
"Then cut the rope tied to your waist"
There was a moment of silence and the man decided to hold on the rope with all his strength.
The next day the climber was found dead and frozen,his body hanging down from the rope and his hands holding the rope only Three feet away from the ground!

i read the story twice to find any errors but i cant find anything.
you show great creativity and imagination in this story... congratulation!!!!
also thx for your help

Personally, I would play with sentence length a bit more. It would add more drama to your piece. That's just a matter of personal preference though. So other than that, the story is perfect! And if you want to make it more "beautiful", just add more adjectives. Try and describe the scene exactly how you imagine it so that the reader can feel as if they're there themselves

The story tells about a mountain climber,who wanted to climb the highest mountain.
He began his adventure after many years of experience ,but since he wanted the success just for himself,he decided to climb the mountain alone.

His climbing was going well and everything was ok till the very night that the mishap took place.
That night the moon and the stars were covered by the clouds and the man could not see anything .
As he was climbing only a few feet away from the top of the mountain ,he slipped and fell down .
When he was falling with swift speed,the climber could not see anything but black spots, and he went down.
During the falling , all of the good and bad scenes of his life came to his mind.He was thinking about how death was approaching .

All of a sudden he felt the rope was tied to his waist and kept him tightly.His body was hanging in the air and only the rope was holding him.

In that moment of being still , he had no other choice but to scream"Help me God"
Suddenly a deep voice came from the sky and said "What do you want me to do?"
"Save me God"
"Do you really think I can help u?"
"Of course I believe you can"
"Then cut the rope which is \ is tied to your waist"
There was a moment of silence and the man decided to hold on the rope with all his strength.
The next day the climber was found dead and frozen,his body was hanging down from the rope and his hands was holding the rope only Three feet away from the ground!