Nowadays, every person looks for a benefit in abusiness.
... Why business? Your topic is not about business, but about jobs.
However, there is no agreement among the people, about what should be considered as the most significant aspect of a career.
....This too sounds out of topic.
In the introduction, you need to introduce your topic to the reader. You should not write ideas that distract the main theme.
Firstly, the experiences, which we obtain during an occupation, are more important than the money.
First, the experiences that we earn by doing a job is more valuable and important than money.Obviously, experience is something, that can help us to improve our skills, and as a result to promotehave ourselves elevated in a profession.
For an example, an employee, who contributes in different projects in a company, and trytries hard to become better in his job, feels more satisfied than a person (no comma) who always thinks about earning more money, without any improvement.