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Students usually obtain lots of assignments from the professor. It can waste a large amount of time.


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Oct 20, 2014   #1
should students have part-time jobs while studying? Exampes and reasons to support your answer

Works can be really tough for many people. In fact, when it comes to students, work can reduce their performance in university or college. Furthermore, money can alter the path that students are walking on which is studying. Therefore, I reinforce the community which disagrees that students should work.

Students usually obtain lots of assignments from the professor. It can waste from them a large amount of time. Since, those tasks are not one day thing. Thus, It consumes from students lots energy or efforts and time to finalize it in a correct way. Moreover, it might turn out that they did something incorrectly. Subsequently, there is a possible that they will have to redo their tasks. However, that situation does not often emerge. Now, imagine yourself if students will have a work. Obviously, it is an additional burden to shoulder. Therefore. students will always be exhausted in class. They will not perform well in classes. Hence, their comprehension of new information will be diminished. Even though, it really depends on the person because people have different stamina. In fact, many people affirm that they can study ,and in, parallel , working. However, most of them do not want to confess that works make the huge impact on their studies' outcome.

Furthermore, money will be the only thing in their mind. Since, when people work, then the addiction to money will appear. They want to acquire money more and more. In other words, humans are greedy creatures and it is inevitable to possess that problem. As time goes by, the likelihood that students will quit studying and go to work is quite high. Since, many things can happen such as failing the test or an pivotal exam. Students can dismay and give up after those pressures, Again, this does not apply to everyone, because people in this world have a variety of perspectives and points of view.

It is because of the aforementioned reasons that I firmly disagree that students should have a work while studying. For the reasons that, it will affect badly on students' result in colleague or university. Moreover, it can lead students toward stepping on the wrong path.
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Oct 20, 2014   #2
There are many grammar issues. Change your first word to Work.


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