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Students need to be seen and feel like they are valued.


nda18 46 / 81 9  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
TED Summary : Every Kid need a champion - Rita Pierson

Nowadays, the value of human connection is rarely discussed by educators. The significant relationship between the educators and the student is the key to guide student reaching their potential. The teacher can become a good actors and actresses in changing students from nobody into somebody by leaving a legacy of relationship that could never disappear. Even though there are many students who have a bad behaviour and influence the teaching value, but actually, the students need to be seen and feel like they are valued. Educators can become a champion to every child and create a wonderful world which have the students who not afraid to take a risk.

NinaJoesuf25 36 / 66 4  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
@nda18 Hi Nurul,
I think it is good but let me help you to fix minor problem.
I hope it will be useful for you.

... behaviour and influence ON the teaching value, but actually, the students ...
well, this is a contradiction issue, at first you mentioned double conjunction. please, be careful Nurul :)
so this the formula,
even though sv, sv not even though sv, but sv


the students who ARE not afraid to take a risk INTO CONSIDERATION.


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