please give me feedback of my writing in order to enhance vocabularies, idea and grammar. thanks for your helpStudents at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community.
Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
University is a place where adult students spend their half time to study. For some people, they prefer living university dormitories which offer more opportunities to make friends. For some others, they argue that apartments in the community have an ideal location, which is mostly found in commercial activities. However, I would support that university dormitories are more comforting, convenient, and peaceful as a place to live.
Living in apartment seems to be luxury because it has an exclusivity which can only be owned by some richest people so that they are more likely to live there in order to be seen as prestige. For instance, some students from well-prosperous family tend to make a friendship with matured ones and they think this leads to more merits. As a consequence, there is no doubt that this is paramount for them to live in apartment.
On the other hand, there seem to obtain more advantages to live in university dormitories. First, it opens an opportunity for students to make a relationship with whomever which gives them much time to study together and help an academic obstacle when they get. For example, students can discuss about some lessons when they have not understood yet in the class. Next, this helps the majority of students to learn culture and language especially for international students. As we knew that language is habit so that it enables them to practice more in order to be able to speak fluently. Not only this, living in university dormitories is less cost so as they can allocate their money to other needs such buying books.
In the light of these facts, even though living in apartments is more exclusive and prestigious for some people, but I strongly believe that living in university dormitories is more useful, helpful, and comfortable for some others.