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Studying in a group has a lot of advantages that can promote learning process


moonname 6 / 14 2  
Aug 9, 2013   #1
Although most people prefer to study alone to be more concentrated on lesson topics, I think studying in a group has a lot of advantages that can promote learning process. Therefore, as I am concerned, studying with friends can be much more effective. This way of learning provides some special opportunity for interaction with others and also being corrected.

Firstly, I believe that studying in a group of friends makes it possible to benefit from others' view to comprehend different issues of lessons. To have interaction with people of different abilities is beneficial to promote our understanding and to find better solutions for problems. I remember my last exam on the mathematics examination when I and two of my friends decided to practice for the exam together. The result of the experience was brilliant because any of us could suggest some solutions to solve the equations and problems much sooner and even in a simpler way.

Secondly, another considerable advantage of studying in a group is that we can be informed of our mistakes. When we study alone, we can hardly find out our misunderstandings by ourselves, but in a group we are controlled by others constantly, and it can be unique opportunity to conceive our weaknesses. In addition, in a group we have chances to ask our questions and to solve our problems. Any member of group has some abilities and also inabilities which can be improved by others' guidance. According to the scientific research published in the last issue of Education Journal, almost 80% of our unconscious mistakes can be revealed in a group study.

To sum up, I think having interaction with other member of a study group and also the opportunity to understand our inabilities and mistakes provided by others' guidance are undeniable benefits of studying and practicing as a group. In my opinion, this way of learning helps us to overwhelm our limitations much more easily.

posdream 4 / 12 5  
Aug 9, 2013   #2
I love your ideas. However, I spotted some errors also.

*find better solution for problems*... You don't find solution for problems. But "to".
So its better if u wrote. Fine solution to problems.

*i remember ... I feel u can put it this way... I remembered studying with my friends during my last mathematics examination.

Overall, your english is above average.
dumi 1 / 6,929 1592  
Aug 9, 2013   #3
Although most people prefer to study alone in order to be more concentratedmore on lesson topics, I think studying in a group has a lot of advantages that can promote learning process.

... well, you should have put it like this;
Self studying , without any doubt , would allow a person to concentrate on studies with minimum disturbance and interference compared studying in groups. However, in my view, I believe that group studying has lots of advantages in shaping one's personality, skills and knowledge.
Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
Aug 16, 2013   #4
Firstly, I believe that studying in a group of friends makes it possible to benefit from others' view to comprehend different issues of lessons

... give more focus to your reason;
First, group study provides the opportunity to benefit from each others' views.... Now give an example

Secondly, another considerable advantage of studying in a group is that we can be informed of our mistakes.

.... very good point.
Secondly, group studies help us to understand whether we are on the right track without being carried away by our own conclusions.


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