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Substantial increase in criminal activities is a serious concern of many countries around the world.


rupen008 1 / 1  
Jul 28, 2015   #1
In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime ?
How can we deal with those causes ?


Substantial increase in criminal activities is a serious concern of many countries around the world. This includes thefts, murders, black-mailing and homicides in the developed as well as in the developing nations. In my opinion, the main reason of such crime is the increase in number of jobless people within the society. This essay will demonstrate how skilled unemployment can play significant role in criminal activities followed by the proposed solution to mitigate the problem.

There are may people who are well qualified but unemployed due to lack of job opportunities. Such unemployment creates unnecessary pressure on them, since they had to support their families as well as to repay the education loans. As a result of which, they choose an alternative which might give them temporary support of money, but it is not in the benefit of the society, and they are forced to commit crimes.

One of the major and workable solution to this problem would be interference of government in creating equal and sufficient job opportunities for the residents. This can be possible by proper involvement of the city mayors in local affairs and by utilizing taxpayer's money in city development thereby creating job opportunities for locals. By this, locals will be occupied in their jobs or businesses and will be earning monies, which will eventually develop city as well as reduce the crime level.

Above shows that how unemployment can play major role in the increased crime rates and how proper actions by the governments can help reducing such crimes. It is advised that nation's rulers to be more alert and take appropriate steps to reduce crimes, which will make this world a better and safer place to live.

Killeener 3 / 5 1  
Jul 28, 2015   #2
Like your essay, but you should provide some specific examples(like news that is related to crime, government, and etc) and explanations to strengthen the overall essay.


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