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Subterranean Railroad Tracks in Six Cities


putri22 33 / 33 5  
Feb 21, 2016   #1
Information about the date opened, kilometres of route and passengers per year of the subterranean railroad tracks in six cities is illustrated in the table. Overall, it can obviously be seen that London railway line is the oldest and has the longest route among other cities while Tokyo has the greatest number of the passengers per year.

According to the table, an underground railway system in London was opened at the end of 18th century with the longest route among other cities (394 kilometres) while Paris and Tokyo started opening in the early 19th century with 199 and 155 kilometres of route respectively. In 1976, Washington DC opened a 126 kilometres subterranean railroad and Kyoto started to operate it's in 1981 with only 11 kilometres of route which is the shortest route among others. An underground railway system in Los Angeles is begun to run in 2001 with 28 kilometres of route.

With regard to the total of people who use the systems per year, Tokyo has the biggest number (1927 million) while Paris and London has 1191 and 775 million respectively. Los Angeles and Kyoto are the least in the number of the passengers with a slight gap, 50 and 45 million respectively.



Diqon 10 / 33 12  
Feb 22, 2016   #2
hello Putri. let me give you some correct sentences the i have done here.

Information about the date opened, kilometers of route and passengers per year ...
Overall, it can obviously be seen that London railway line was the oldest one that had been built in 1863 and hashad the longest route among other cities while Tokyo haspresented the greatest number of the passengers per year.since this railway systems had operated in year 1981.


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