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Sumary of Myriad Subways in Europe


gdesastr 2 / 2  
Sep 19, 2016   #1
Public transportation was being big deal in myriad Europe cities, namely in London, Paris also Moscow. Subway is not uncommon transportation in there anymore, not only for public transportation but also for describe art and achievement of their nation, absolutely it makes tourist interested. In London, ever since 1863 subway is major public transportation during to traffic was crowded by pedestrians and horses. The government opt to build the railway on underground of the city which construction big deeper tunnel due to keep not destroy the building above land. Londoner called it is tube.

Let's move to Paris, the city of art, there are subways with art nouveau touch the mostly side of architecture. That's makes Paris typical subway we know as Paris Metro. There are touching with mosaics, sculptures and painting in side by side. By contrast with Paris, in Moscow, as we know, there is The Moscow Metro, Russian subway which makes military headquarter too, during World War II. The Moscow Metro design to adapt with cold weather with extremely temperature is often happened in there. Ultimately, the kinds of Europe subway had been helping reduce the greenhouse effect in today's world.
mdamanhuri77 22 / 35 3  
Sep 19, 2016   #2
hi, let me give you some advices.

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Giansy11 18 / 32 5  
Sep 19, 2016   #3
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... weather with extremely temperature, where is often happened in there.

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