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Summarize TED video : Al Gore, New Thinking On The Climate Crisis


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Sep 14, 2016   #1
Summarize TED video : Al Gore, New Thinking On The Climate Crisis

On that TED video, Al Gore argues that the way to make more people care about the environmental crisis is to write legislation dealing with the environment. On that video, he explain about a lot of problems during human become an extinct population, such as global warming, a war, lack of green areas, and also a problems about how care a people with another one. He believe, when people have a bit more care each others, many dispute can be solve more easily because they can feel the same things with others. To make his arguments become a real, he wanted legislation focused on the environment and make it very near the bottom of congressional list of concerns. The aforementioned evidence reveals that government with they legislation is more close to the environment, to make them believe that their government do a right things. And also, Al Gore focuses more on the political side of what can we do to help the environment.
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Sep 14, 2016   #2
hallo :)
overall your writing has been good but there is a little error sentence.

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