Hujjatul19 45 / 70 3 Sep 19, 2016 #1This summary is extracted from an article published on cosmopolitan.com/style-beauty/a3381189/anniesa-hasibuan-first-nyfw-runway-collection-with-hijabs/ on 15 September 2016. Its origina title is Anniesa Hasibuan Becomes First Designer to Present NYFW Collection with HijabsFashion designers are getting more competitive. In the lastest New York Fashion Week,a very prestigious event among fashion designers, presents a very talented designer, Anniesa Hasibuan. An Indonesian fashion designer who focuses on muslim fashion. This very talented designer presents her collections which are inspired by her hometown, Jakarta. By using colorful silks and patterns, she made 48 glamour collections that consist of trousers, suits, kimonos, tunics, and gowns. She said that her aim is to introduce Indonesian name globally especially in fashion world. At the end of her runway, she gets a standing ovation, a high esteem in Fashion Weeks.
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