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Summary article_Happy People Make Their Spouses Healthier


David54 15 / 22 1  
Sep 27, 2016   #1
Currently, there is a new study about why people whose partner are happier likely to be healthy. 2000 married couples are being respondent over six years, from 2006 until 2012 and found that people who are informed a happier spouses also noticed have feeling better. The reasons why these might be happened. Firstly, a happy spouse will take care their partner carefully. Secondly, husband or wife with positive sensation is more getting comfortable to do their activities well, such as eat better, exercise regularly, sleep on time, and doing other constructive things in near future. This reason is strengthened by Bill Chopik, an associate psychology professor at Michigan State university, who said "happy people drag their spouses out of bed to go exercise, and they encourage them to eat healthier". Moreover, happy pairs make their relationship enjoyable to avoid their partner feel stress so it can improve the health of their lover. This study generates an output that the effect is available for wives and husbands, so sharing love is a great way to keep healthy.
fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Sep 27, 2016   #2
Helo david,
you have done great, let me give you some suggest

... study about why people whose (who had a )partner are happier likely to be healthy.
... until 2012(.) and found the result shows that married couples who are informed are a happier spouses also noticed by havefeeling better better feeling they had after.

Good Luck :)
Best regards, Tami
Fitri12 28 / 53 6  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
Hi David, it's my pleasure to share. Your writing is pretty good,since I found only slightly mistakes.

Currently, there is a new study about (or regarding) why people whose partner(s) are happier likely ...
2000 married couples are /have been/ being respondent over (...) noticed have feeling better(better feeling) .

Thank you.


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