David54 15 / 22 1 Sep 28, 2016 #1A new report is released by the World Health Organization (WHO), more than 90% of the world's population areas are contaminated with pollution within unsafe stage. As the result, in 2012 there is more than 6 million people died due to illness related to air pollution. In some countries, such as Africa, Asia and the Middle East, found that are getting worst pollution. This matter continues to increase in line with economic, industrial growth and rise of car ownership. It also has impact for low and middle-income countries, where there is 90% of global death occurred. However, not every countries that have high-income are free from this problem. Around 15% of cities in the America and more than 60% of cities in Europe do not meet the WHO standards. On the other hand, scientist also found that air pollution able to affect everything that related with pregnancy to brain functions.
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