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Summary of article Bouncy bone can be 3D-printed to become a universal repair kit By Andy Coghlan


Ifan21 22 / 24 2  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
The sophisticated technology comes from Medical prespective which has been developed through Ink which can construct 3D-print flexibe bone. This will be implanted inside the body to substitute particular bone painless to be fixed in size. forthere, this manufacture-based bone provides many marits including adaptable, giving surgeons a cheap and effective in brisk healing.

Either way, this material is rather frigile because during the treatment or surgical operation it sometimes can be crack and deteriorated, unfortunately i can not to be remodelled during which.

Ramille shah and her team,student at Universuty of Northwestern, have developed advance ink that can be 3D-printed bone implants are ultra-elastic. these implants are briskly proliferated by blood vascular and slowly turn into True bone.
fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Helo ivan,
Hope you are in a great condition
You are done great, let me give you some suggest

==> Medical prespective (Perspective ) which ........t 3D-print flexibe (flexible ) bone.
==> Either way, this material is rather frigile (fragile ) because
==> i can not to be remodelled during which.
==> student at Universuty (university ) of Northwestern, have developed advance ink (had developed advance ink )

you seem done many typos, this sounds unimportant but this is quiet interfere your IELTS score, you have to check your word first before post

Good luck and keep fighting
Best regard, Tami :)
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Sep 29, 2016   #3
The sophisticated technology comes from Medical prespective ... = using specially developed ink, a new sophisticated equipment for medical purposes has been invented to flexibly construct bone with 3-D print technology.

This PRINTED MATERIAL will be implanted (...) particular bone painlessLY to be fixed in size IN THE FIXED SIZE
forthere, this (...) provides many marits MERITS including adaptable ADAPTABILITY AN giving surgeons a cheap and effective in brisk healing BRISKLY

Either way, this material is rather frigile FRAGILE because during the (...) and deteriorated, unfortunately i can not to be remodelled during which.does not make a sense. revise it

... and her team,student at Universuty of Northwestern, have developed advanceD ULTRA-ELASTIC ink that can be USED IN 3D-printed bone implants are ultra-elastic . these implants are briskly ...

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