Many inhabitants in Haity are suffered from Cholera, 9,200 people died from 770,000 people who get the disease. Cholera is a disease which is happened because of Vibrio Cholerae and the symptoms are diarrhea, vomiting, and cramping also dehydration and shock if there are no treatment.Cholera will spread easily if the area has poor sanitation and hygiene. In Haity, there is a river which people use to be a primary source for drinking but it lacking sanitation and people consuming it without a proper treatment. This disease can be prevented through careful sanitation and hygiene. People need to use bottled with unbroken seals, and treat the water with chlorine or boil it at least a minute. By washing hands after using bathroom, before and after eating also can help people to prevent the disease. The most important thing to prevent it by properly disposing human waste by locating the sanitation system away from body of water for about 98 feet or 30 meters.
Link : news.nationalgeographic.com/2016/08/haiti-cholera-crisis-united-nations-admission/
Hi Farida, here's my analysis towards your article summary.
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- Cholera will spread easily if thea particular/certain area has poor sanitation and hygiene.
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That's it Farida, I hope the above-mentioned feedback would be beneficial towards your future writing development. Anyway, Good luck :)
There are a number of ways that could help in decreasing the number of people suffering from Colerah.
First, by creating a proper sanitation and hygiene systems, by using unbroken sealed bottles, by treating or boiling, for at least 1 minute, water before drinking, by washing hands after going to bathrooms, before and after finishing their meals.
