What is ecotourism? It knows the importance of environmental preservation - summary task2

What is ecotourism ?

Ecotourism is an environmentally responsible travel to the nature area where gives low impact visitor and give a contribution in natural development. A various types of ecotourism includes visit the national park, nature preserve, visit the traditional craft maker and even become a volunteer at the natural environmental protection project. Otherwise the hunting, rafting and hiking activities through wilderness area is not a part of green movement. In this case, accommodation comes under the ecotourism concern, where the ecotourism program supports the accommodation which involves in sustainable benefits to local community thru employ the native society, as of the accommodation participated in compose the sustainable tourism. for the sake of decrease the air and marine pollution, the tourists prefer to ride a bicycle or walk join to the bus or cruise line tour. Still, the cruise company institutes to develop the "green movement" tour to draw the tourists, but unfortunately, a large degree of cruise firm that uses the concept of ecotourism only for gain the high upside, whilst they obey the real ecotourism regulation.

Hello Rosa! I try to give you a different variation to write paragraph one. Hope it helps.

Ecotourism is an environmentally responsible travel to the nature ... ---->>> Ecotourism is a kind of tourism that brings the tourists to visit a green area and introduces them the importance of environmental preservation, so that they have a responsibility to the environment around the tourist attraction.

A various types of ecotourism includes visit visiting the national park, (...) and even become becoming a volunteer at ... (it should not be two main verb in a sentence, so you can change the form as 'gerund' form)

... through wilderness area is are not a part of green movement.

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