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TED Summary : The history of our world in 18 minutes


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Sep 16, 2016   #1
Universe can created complexity, but it difficult thing. David cristian showed the slideshow about one of example from 13.7 billions years ago, to the beginning of time. There was happened that world was darkest and emptiest thing at the past. After that universe appeared by boosting and expanding. Clouds gathered to be more powerful. All the universe such as new chemicals element structure for many particles. When the large star dissapeared it effect for temperature decrease. Although, solar system became the center of energy of universe. There had conditions divided into three elements for life, the right of amount energy, diverse chemical elements and liquid such a water which related to form of world. Water was the most important thing for lived there. Then, other example from Dna which contain information how to made living organism. So many theory that have been explained for formed the world. For the future, collective many explanation like learning for better condition to lived here. While used Fossil energy support the vital an intelectual tool for the future.
rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Sep 16, 2016   #2
Hi andika08
here are my suggestions

Universe can created(create = after modal we need verb inf)

but it isa difficult thing.

one of examples from

There was happened that world was darkest ...there was a time when a world was dark and empty.

After thatthe universe appeared
When the large star dissapeareddisappeared it gives effect forto the temperature decrease.

There had conditions dividedlife is divided into three elements for life ,

Water wasis the most important ...
... from Dna which containsthe informationof how to made living organism.

keep writing !


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