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TED Summary Jamie Oliver Talk About Obesity and Food


Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 22, 2016   #1
Jamie Oliver stated that one of four peoples in United States will die because of what they eat every day. In America the biggest death factor is caused by heart disease which is diet-related disease. As a chef, Jamie Oliver challenge people to stop eating highly-processed food and start to cook and enjoying fresh food. 30 years ago, many foods available are local and fresh but now, big companies make people far apart from the "real" food and offering fast food which added many additive ingredients and sugar.

Ensuring what children eats in the school also important things to do. In America, average kids eating fast foods in the school every day which is not fresh and not enough vegetables. It is important to control the children about what they eat and teach them to eat vegetable.

Dioba 68 / 104 7  
Sep 22, 2016   #2
Hi Yonathan,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you
1.biggest death factor is caused by heart disease
2.local and fresh, but now, big companies......-----> local and fresh, but now big companies ....
In America, the biggest death factor is caused ----->you must put comma after "America" (punctuation mistake)
3.enjoying
eats
mdamanhuri77 22 / 35 3  
Sep 27, 2016   #3
... United States will die because of what they eat every day. In America, the biggest death factor is caused by heart diseaseheart attack which is diet-related disease.

... and start to cook and enjoyingenjoy fresh food. in 30 years ago, many foods available are local and fresh, but now, the big companies make (...) "real" food and offering fast food which ...

Ensuring what children eats in the school also ...
It is importantcompulsory to control the children (...) teach them to eat vegetables

hi yonathan,,that's all my advices


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