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Summary Article: Keep your goals to yourself


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Sep 26, 2016   #1
Everyone has a purpose in life and the dreams that they expect in the future will happen. All of people should start the imagination to imagine the dream. Then, if everyone shall say about all their dreams, would not the people will be near to their dreams? However, according to psychologists and psychologists tests proved that, if someone says about their dreams to others tend to happen it will be a little bit. Therefore, we recommend everyone to save their dreams so that they always remember about it and will do it. According to Kurt Lewin (inventor of social psychologists) in 1926, it is a substitute. In 1933, Vera Mahler found that when a case is justified by others, it felt real in our minds. There are several ways that everyone is not easily satisfied, is resist the temptation to tell anyone about the dream and goal of life. Hold for some time about the happy feeling that will be distributed to others. If there are people who want to say, there is only one effective way is a way that does not create satisfied quickly.

justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Sep 26, 2016   #2
Hi Atthya, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be helpful as well as useful to your writing projects. We aim to provide you with the most accurate and credible feedback that will assist you in coming up with an even stronger essay.

Having said that, please find a few suggestions below;

- the dreams that they expect to happen in the future will happen .
- All of peopleEverybody should start the imagination to imagine theimagining their dream.
- ThenHowever , if everyone shall say about all theirkeeps talking about their dreams, - would not the people will be near to their dreams?
- However, aA ccording to psychologists and psychologists tests proved that,
- if someone saystalks more about their dreams
- to others they tend to happen it will be a little bit .
- always remember about it and will do ittake action in achieving it .
- If there are people who want to say, there is only one effective way is a way that does not create satisfied quickly.- I'm not exactly sure what you want to say in this particular sentence, please elaborate.

There you have it Atthya, I hope the above remarks are helpful as well as valuable to your revision and for future reference, make sure that you practice a lot, create drafts of whatever it is that you want to write as this will help you enhance your writing and also maximize the words as you use it in the sentence, mind the placement of your words and make sure that they are logical and meaningful enough in order to portray the ideas that you want your readers to understand.


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