During 5 days (NEED COMMA HERE) Moana, movies from Disney which IS estimated get revenue approximately $81.1 million
,,,,,, THEN WHAT IS THE REST OF THE SENTENCE ? YOU USE 'WHICH' THAT MEANS IT MUST CONTAIN MORE THAN ONE CLAUSE
1. After time signals don't forget add comma
2. WHICH + IS + ESTIMATED -------> PASSIVE FORM
GENERAL SUGGESTION:
PLEASE MAKE SUMMARY LONGER. GOOD SUMMARY MUST CONTAIN :
1. INTRODUCTION
2. BODY
3. CONCLUSION
AND I CAN'T FOUND IT IN YOUR ESSAY THAT STATES CLEARLY.!!!