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SUMMARY : How Netted Birds Can Actually Help Conservation


Iforsa 35 / 54 5  
Aug 18, 2016   #1
The article written by Todd Forsgren elaborates relating to how netted birds can support conservation. Todd forsgren is a bird photographer. He interested in series photographs which integrated between Aubudon's famously illustrations and Peterson's pragmatic field-guide images. Subsequently, he and ornithological researcher got around Americas from 2006 to 2014 to make his dream becoming true. He used unique way to photograph birds by making portraits while birds caught in mist nets for temporarily. During his journey around united states, Puerto Rico, Mexico, Costa Rica and Brazil, he succeeded to portrait 57 species including white-crowned sparrow in California. Scientists were going to check birds regularly every 30 minutes. They believed that working with Todd forsgren was the effective way due the reason that mist nest was more safety for keeping birds alive than using nets. Forsgren organized immediately his portable studio when the birds caught. Scientist, on the other hand, identified the birds meticulously to get key information for conservation.

nationalgeographic.com/photography/proof/2016/07/bird-portraits-forsgren/

Fadhilahumar91 61 / 73 6  
Aug 18, 2016   #2
hi iforsa..

... Todd Forsgren elaborates relatingrelationtothat how netted birds ...

... Americas from 2006 to 2014, that how to make his dream becoming true.
.... Costa Rica and Brazil, he succeededsucceed to portrait 57 species including ...
.... They believed that working with Todd forsgren was the effective way ...
(i think you make a simple sentence, it is not eligible to understand)

....[scientist , on the other hand, the scientist identified the birds meticulously ...

thank you.....
justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Aug 18, 2016   #3
Hi Sofi, below are my thoughts and enhancements on your summary.

- elaborates relating to how netted birds can support conservation.
- He is interested in series photographs
- which is integrated between
- Aubudon's famously illustrations and
- Americas from 2006 to 2014 to make his
- dream becomingcome true.
- He used unique ways to photograph birds by
- makingcreating portraits while
- birds are caught in mistmesh nets for temporarily.

There you have it Sofi, I left the last few sentences of the summary in order for you to practice editing it yourself by following the above corrections. I hope this helps and for future writing reference, mind the right form of words that you incorporate in your summary and pretty much in all the writing projects that you will have. The right form of words will bring your essay to a different level and it will be easier to understand, this way you are also able to effectively convey your message to your readers.


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