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Nov 16, 2016   #1
Electric fields can stimulate deep in your brain without surgery

Deep Brain Stimulation (DBS) is one of the latest inventions for medical treatment in the meantime. This method begins to deliver an electrical current deep into the brain by implanting a long thin electrode through a hole in the skull. Therefore, it is predicted that this way will be used in many investigation such as for depression, obesity and obsessive compulsive disorder without needing for surgery.

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Nov 16, 2016   #2
Bung, when you write a summary essay like this, make sure to represent both sides of the discussion in the essay. The original article indicates that there are both good and bad, pros and cons, of using this system of treatment. Therefore, you must present the bad opinion in your summary also. What I noticed is that you only read the first half of the article, you did not read the article to the very end. Which is why you were only able to present the first half of the discussion in your presentation. You must practice reading faster and more efficiently so that you will always present a full discussion. Learn how to take note of keywords and data through the scanning of the article. If you must read under a time limitation, make sure to note as much of the original article as you can during the note taking period. This will help you develop a more informed essay presentation.

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