For the first time in almost six months, humanitarian has been sent to four besieged region in Syria.
According to the international comitte of the Red Cross, the emergent aid, such as brought food, medical supplies and hygiene kits for 60,000, has been delivered by Seventy-one lorries reached Madaya and Zabadani, near Damascus, and Foah and Kefraya, in Idlib province.
As reported, the aid such as Seventy-one lorries reached region of Madaya and Zabadani, near Damascus, and Foah and Kefraya, in Idlib province, on Sunday.
In the midst of besieged, the aid can help children and many civilian who have been suffering since 6 months ago. Even less the UN suspended aid deliveries across Syria for 48 hours after a deadly attack to the convoy.
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Actually, before you describe contents of your summary, you should display an introduction sentence about its resource. For example
THIS SUMMARY IS EXTRACTED FROM AN ORIGINAL ARTICLE ON BBC.COM IN 2016 ABOUT....................
... has been sent to four besieged regionS in Syria.
According to the international comitte COMMITTEE of the Red Cross, the emergent aid...
... children and many civilianS who have been suffering (...) after a deadly attack to ON the convoy.
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