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Summary: Plant Life in the Taklimakan Desert


ibal28 20 / 30 5  
Aug 11, 2016   #1
The Taklimakan Desert is the second biggest desert before Sahara Desert in Africa that has a low rainfall with a daily temperature up to 20 degrees and also suddenly sandstorms that most be an extremely condition. Some parts of Taklimakan Desert is a sand dunes, it causes the area free from vegetation. But another areas, where it is between the open desert and oases, there are plants grow well.

Taklimakan Desert has a species of plants that grow well such as Populus euphratica, Tamarix ramosissima and Alhagi sparsifolia with the different ways to survive. The survival of Takilamakan Plants are also useful to be a protector for their ecosystem such as stabilized of sand dunes, preventing the erosion and conserve biodiversity.
ashelarisa48 36 / 52 4  
Aug 12, 2016   #2
Hello Ibal!
You did it good, but I want to give a bit feedback on your summary.

The Taklimakan Desert is the second biggest desert before after Sahara Desert in Africa....

Taklimakan Desert has a species of plants a variety of plant species that grow well ...

... preventing the erosion and conserve conserving biodiversity.

Keep writing! Keep spirit!
Best regards
Faridadwi18 67 / 104 13  
Aug 12, 2016   #3
Hi Ibal,

Suddenly sandstorms that which most be an extremely condition. Some parts of Taklimakan Desert is are a sand dunes.
But in another areas area where the plants grow well it is in between the open desert and oases there are plants grow well.
preventing the erosion and conserve conserving biodiversity.

You made a good essay but may be you should pay more attention in plural and singular. Hope it will help you. thank you
ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 12, 2016   #4
hallo ibal
i'd like to suggest you additional corrections

... Tamarix ramosissima and Alhagi sparsifolia with the different ways differently to survive . i think you don't need to write "to survive" because you have written "grow weel".


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