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IELTS Writing Task 1 Summary article: Prediction of climate change in 2070


Alamsyah Ismail 24 / 43  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
Climate change and global warming can attract the disadvantageous for human especially for our environment. The researchers make a prediction in 2070 that climate change might inhibit plant growing proccess. Wheat, rice, maize, rye, barley and sorghum are sort of plants which are needed human stay alive. Grasses are an important food source for human-certainly rice, wheat and corn. Evolutionary adaptions seems particularly unlikely for domesticated species and even local declines may be devastating for some human populations. However, moving to more favourable geographical locations is not an option for amount of grass species because limits to their seed dispheral and obstacles: mountains and human settlements. Thus, let's pertain to construct our good ethical behavior that can preserve our environment.

erwiin1 9 / 17  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hi Alamsyah Ismail

Your essay is very good, but I would give you several corrections

1. ... might inhibit plant growing proccess (process ).
2. Evolutionary adaptions seems (seem ) particularly unlikely ...
3. because (because of ) limits to their seed dispheral (dispersal ) and obstacles: ...

Thank you


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