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TED Summary: The Prison of your Mind by Sean Stephenson


Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
Sean Stephenson is a disabled person but he proved that physically weakness is not an excuse for not influenced many peoples. First, he taught them to never believe every prediction that doesn't empower them, Sean himself predicted by many doctors that he would be dead within 24 hours, and now he sit and inspired many peoples.

Second, never pitying yourself, he said pity is the most dangerous drugs in the world that would totally frozen your potential. Being disable does not mean you are literally disable, but the real disability is refusal to adapt. Adaptable in every conditions give many chances for you to learn with new environment and meet other people. The last, you must bullying yourself with many negative predictions, opinions that other people tell you. The best thing to do is love yourself in every conditions and love everyone because everybody need to be loved

akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hello Yonathan
These are my vantage points to finalize your summary. Review my notes and deal with them
GOOD LUCK
:D


... believe every prediction that doesn't DOES NOT (NEVER EVER EVER HARNESS CONSTRUCTION IN THE FORMAL WRITING) empower them, . THAT REASON APPEARS BECAUSE Sean himself EVER predicted by many ...

... he said THE pity is the most dangerous drugs in the world that , WHICH would totally frozen FREEZE your potential. Being disable does not mean THAT you are literally disableD PERSON, but the real disability is THE refusal to adapt. Adaptable in every conditions giveS US many chances for you to learn with new environment ...

The last, you must bullying yourself with many A LARGE NUMBER OF (You should make it various, MANY/ A GREAT NUMBER/ A LARGE NUMBER/ PLENTY OF) negative predictions, ABOUT opinions that ...

The best thing to doNE is love yourself in every conditions and love everyone because everybody needS to be loved


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