Nowadays, people is extremely interesting in all event relating to the moon such as harvest moons, super moons, total eclipses, etc. Because of lunar event draws people attention through photos in internet. On 30 September, people from Western hemisphere experienced another lunar name, black moon, that popularly explained as second new moon in a month. This happens because moon surface that is illuminated by sunlight stay away from the Earth. So, Moon side seen completely black shadow from Earth. Actually, It can not be watched like any other new moon. Black Moon will be seen from Eastern hemisphere on October 30. For people who live in East Asia, Japan, New Zealand, and Australia, could be seen on October 31, appropriate with Spooky day, Hallowen.
Hello Sari,
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2.This happened because ofthe moon surface that is ...
... black shadow from the Earth.
Hi Trisna
let me give you some advice...
Nowadays, people is extremely interesting(interested) in all event (...) such as harvest moons(moon) , super moons(moon) , total eclipses, etc.
... attention through photos in(on) internet.
... that popularly explained as (a) second new moon in a month.
So, Moon side(has) seen completely black ..
... appropriate with Spooky day, (the) Hallowen.
Thank you...
Hi, Sari Trisna
I would give you some corrections for your essay
1. Nowadays, people is extremely interesting (interested ) in all event (...) as harvest moons, super moons (supermoons ), total eclipses, etc
2. ... people attention through photos in (photos on ) internet (the internet )
3. So, Moon side seen (saw ) completely black shadow from Earth
4. appropriate with Spooky day, Hallowen (Hallowen )
Thank you
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... experienced another lunar name,IT CALLED black moon, that ...
This happens because OF (BECAUSE +NOUN USE OF) moon surface that is illuminated ...
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hi friend , i have some sugestions for you..
it could be seen on October 31...
in all events relating to
Because of lunar event draws, the people attention through photos in internet.
Moon side is seen ...
concern about the grammatical error of yours and also punctuation
i hope it can help you...
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