TED Summary - My Seven Species of robot - Dennis Hong

My Seven Species of robot - Dennis Hong

Dennis Hong is the chairman of Romela, the robotic company in the USA and they have large quantities of rewards from prestige institutions. To run its business, they set 5 effective behaviours while the most powerful secrets are nobody criticises anybody's ideas, nobody critics any opinion. This in absolutely principal because often students fear of they fell uncomfortable to deliver idea or advice. How others likely think about their opinions is always come up in the mind. It effectively impact on students' performance, they have wacky, crazy, brilliant idea which has never been existence. Finally, the whole room is just electrified with creative energy and this is how we develop our ideas. The second secret is to endeavour your robot to overcome current problems. The company is valuable due to its contribution to society and the world.

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This in[is] absolutely principal because often students [are] [often] fear of they fell uncomfortable [feeling] to deliver idea or advice.

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