What Your Social Media Profile Photo Says About Your Personality
Social media has become need everyone in the world. People upload profile photo in social media and it will describe their personality. There are an attempt to match the profile pictures about 66,000 Twitter users with their personality traits. Preoţiuc-Pietro and his colleagues analysed each person's 3200 most recent tweets. It is done to quickly categorize the personalities of thousands of Twitter users. On the other hand, from the group of 66,000 only 434 which completed a traditional psychological survey. extraversion, agreeableness, openness, conscientiousness and neuroticism were big five personality traits which scored by users. The research showed a correlation relationship between test results and the features of each profile picture. Nevertheless, Mandy Jennifer Golbeck at the University of Maryland want to see in profile pictures from other platforms such as Facebook. Meanwhile, said David Stillwell at the University of Cambridge that analysis of the profile pictures are not enough to replace a personality. There are several methods to describe a person's personality by combine the analysis of the profile photo and status of social media users.
Andi, while the grammar and sentence structure problems abound in your essay, it does not remove from the meaning of your summary. Your information is complete and accurate enough to authoritatively inform the reader about the data that you gleaned from the original article. There are proper references to the key aspects of the essay such as the other studies that relate to the study of a person's social media profile that will be sure to increase your final score in the actual test. That said, I have to point out the problem aspect of the essay though. The only problem that I can see relates to your first sentence in your opening. The meaning is lost. It doesn't really make sense because the full thought development of the sentence is not completed. There is no topic phrase or keyword that could have helped to give that sentence more meaning in relation to the rest of the summary. Aside from that sentence problem, the rest of the essay did very well in terms of task accuracy.
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